I don't belong here

I don't belong here

A Poem by Cara

I don't belong here
This is not my life
I don't know anyone
And no one understands
I don't belong here
This is not my land
Am i still alive
Or am i just dead
I don't belong here
I can't count the stars 
There must be a sky out there
Will i ever survive
I don't belong here
This is not who i am
This is not who i want to be
This is not how it ends
I don't belong here
But where do i belong?
Will i ever find it
Will anything else go wrong
I don't belong here
I keep remembering that
Nothing should change me
This is what i should always understand
I don't belong here
I'm hitting the road
I'll find the old me
And take her along
To where i belong

© 2017 Cara


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' I can't count the stars ~ There must be a sky out there.. '

When as lost as your words weep line by line, you
can only fall OR walk on. Seems your words are your strength, they'll surely give the fuel you need. Desperately lost words you've penned and yet, so beautifully voiced.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

7 Years Ago

sometime the only thing that you've got might be your way out. i have my faith and my words.thank y.. read more



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i felt that it was emotional and powerful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading
I understand this poem. I have escape often in my life. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to honest and needed ending. Thank you Cara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

7 Years Ago

thank you for dreading XD, i hope that everyone finds the place they belong in and be happy because .. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Sometime we need new location. Allow us to become new. You are welcome.
' I can't count the stars ~ There must be a sky out there.. '

When as lost as your words weep line by line, you
can only fall OR walk on. Seems your words are your strength, they'll surely give the fuel you need. Desperately lost words you've penned and yet, so beautifully voiced.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

7 Years Ago

sometime the only thing that you've got might be your way out. i have my faith and my words.thank y.. read more
I liked how you trailed the emotions down the page.. The turmoil is deeply felt in this write..
Makes me think will we ever find where do we belong..
Well penned and quite relatable to me..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cara

7 Years Ago

thank you, and i' sorry if you feel the same as me, i hope it gets better for both of us XD
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

I think most of us feel like this at some time of our lives.. I hope so too..
You're welcome .. read more

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