your way

your way

A Poem by Cara
"

this is for the picture contest, i saw the picture, and thought of lying at first, but then that's what came out, hope you like it

"

as time pass by, everything will go away

leaving a mark, that will hurt everyday

cry in silence, shush, no one should hear the weep

then wipe your tears, tell no one it hurts so deep

don't ask why; they say,  it's not your place to ask

running will make it worse, they can always bring you back

 thinking you have it all, knowing nothing of the truth

judging you because you smile, while you hid away your bruises

stop, you don't have to run away

it's your right to ask, and not their place to tell you what to say

don't you care about what they think, it's your choice to leave or stay

close your eyes, and sing your last lullaby as you simply walk away

then turn, give them that smile they hate, and let them say what they say

and never cry in front of them, keep that pain hiding in that sweet smile

your always  stronger without them, that's why it's called your way

© 2015 Cara


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Featured Review

I agree,
"keep that pain hiding in that sweet smile
your always stronger without them, that's why it's called your way"
Nice flow of thoughts led to a very good closing. Thank you Cara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

9 Years Ago

thank you, i'm glad you like it XD
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.



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This is a strong piece and its quite inspiring in a way.
Its filled with emotion and depth and has strong meaning.
This wasn't about domestic violence was it? A part of me feels it is, but I'm not really sure.
Great write I enjoyed the read :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

I like that, this is definitely an inspiring poem then, everyone needs to have there voice heard, an.. read more
Cara

8 Years Ago

thank you XD
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
I agree with you on this.Thank you for sharing :))!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

8 Years Ago

thank you for reading XD
zaisham9393

8 Years Ago

You are welcome :)!
I agree,
"keep that pain hiding in that sweet smile
your always stronger without them, that's why it's called your way"
Nice flow of thoughts led to a very good closing. Thank you Cara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

9 Years Ago

thank you, i'm glad you like it XD
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.

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