what if??

 

what if to be dead  is a second chance for life

what if it was meant to correct the wrong and make it write

what if they comes right away when you say their names

to tell you that they are here, but you can't know they are there

to be honest I think  that they fly nearby

the one they used to love

to make sure they are doing fine and surely need's no help

Author's Note

this one came to me when i was commenting at Aurora's poem

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i think it is possible that we have angels who watch over us, certainly...as a matter of fact i am sure of it...whether we listen to those angels or even know how to is the real question. most of us deny them through disbelief, and that is all it takes to negate their presence....good write, inspired by another great writer...

[Cara]

thanks ^-^

[Junert]

Agree with you Quinfinn, but angels are supreme beings, not ghosts. And angels do look after us.

[quinfinn]

i couldn't agree more, Junert!

[Cara]

me too, i know that angels are different from ghosts

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice rhyme but dead's just dead

[Cara]

thanks ^-^

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for sharing the excellent piece asking unanswered questions......

[Cara]

and thank you for reading :D

[Devanshu Rajput]

welcome

[Junert]

Maybe it is so. But once dead one cannot correct the wrongs of their lives or others. Right the wrongs while you live.

[Cara]

good point, but what if? ;D

[Junert]

I bet the dead wondered that too before they died and after death they know the answer but we living are still asking 'what if' and they can't tell us. They are dead.

[Cara]

yes, it is complicated

[Zahra]

very nice. Sometimes i feel them watching over, understanding more than the ones who are near. Thanks for sharing.

[Cara]

thank you for reading ^-^

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Some questions won't be answer till we experience the act or emotion. Thank you for sharing the poem.
Coyote

[Cara]

yes the alive ones will never know
thank youfor reading :D

[Salar Majak]

wow!
nice thought sis :D
glad i inspired you sis!!

[Cara]

:D