a best friend

this one i wrote for my best friend it is simple but it comes from my hart

because you are special for me, because you are not only a friend but a sister too,

because your smile means the world to me, because your tear i never wanna see

because you are as beautiful  as spring, because you are as sweet at the wind

because we will never say good bye, because for you I'm willing to  die

i love you my best friend <3

Reviews

[Rajat malik]

it's so sweet poem, it reveal the reality of what true friends are like... Simple but beautiful work :) I loved it

[Cara]

thank you XD

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome....
P.S. - What is XD?? Couldn't understand please explain it....will be very thankful if you do so

[Cara]

it is like a smiley smiling while his eyes are closed
i feel like it's really happy, and used it a lot :3

[Rajat malik]

Okkk....thanks for teaching me

[zainul]

Wonderful gesture for an adorable friend.
You may look at this part of line and replace 'at' with 'as':
" you are as sweet at the wind"

[Cara]

thanks ^_^ and yes sorry about that ^_^

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)

[InsanityWriter]

Adorable and totally relatable. :) Nicely put. (;

[Cara]

thanks ^-^

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

this the most sweetest thing I have ever read and so simple.
Perfect job :DDDDDD.
10000.0000000.0000/100

[Cara]

thank you :D, glad you liked it XD

[Cara]

^-^

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem ^.^

[Cara]

:D

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:D

[Cara]

:)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[Cara]

lol :D

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

lolz

[Zoya Sahai]

Its very sweet and simply put..straight from the heart.. :)

[Cara]

thank you :)

[Zahra]

this is so sweet. :) lovely sentiments.

[Cara]

thank you

[Junert]

I don't have such a friend. Too self cautious for that.

[Cara]

i know what you mean, i've been there before finding my friend
thnak you

[Junert]

Glad you found yours. Maybe there's one instore for me.

[Cara]

there is, i'm sure
it is just you have to keep your faith in one, make sure she is a great one for you and you are the same for here, even though she has another friend, it will just work out, and believe me, she might even be right next to you, but you just didn't see it yet, trust me that what happened with me.

[Cara]

:D

[Junert]

I'm trusting you.

[Cara]

you never know i might be your best friend ;) I'll be proud to be your best friend :D,

[Junert]

Lol that'd be great but I'm the one that sucks at being a best friend.

[Cara]

best friends are not about " you did this to me then i have to do the same" you know
it is about i like you as a best friend, and I'm ready to die for you because i like you the way you are, even though you don't consider me as a best friend
you just have to smile, because that will be the only thing your best friend will ever need from you, to remember her.
You should try to trust a best friend once, it is really amazing, makes you feel great when your down, makes you smile by mistake to know that someone is thinking of you, when you feel you are alone 

[Cara]

a best friend is a sister a friend, and sometimes a great advise maker

[Junert]

Hmm you understand friendship. Lucky you and your bestfriend.

[Cara]

hey you are lucky too, you have a best friend , someone who really love's you and care about you is waiting for you somewhere, you'll find her there girl cheer up, and I'm sure you will like her, no you will love her, and you both will stay best friends for ever. Smile :D, im sure your smile is amazing :D

[Junert]

:-D :-)

[Cara]

:D ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful Dedication. Nice

[Cara]

thanks

[larryb]

A true friend is worth more than gold as you explain here....well done Cara

[Cara]

thank you

[Cara]

^-^

[Salar Majak]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
this is soooo very sweet!!!!!!
amazingly rhymed too!!
great write :3

[Cara]

thank you ^-^

[Salar Majak]

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