Broken heart

I can't believe I had to move and leave you behind

I can't believe you saw me walk away from your side

And you did nothing, you didn't speak at all

You just stood still, and my teas started to fall

Why did you break my heart?

What have you done to make leaving so hard?

Where should I stand in this world now?

How can I live without you around?

La la la la oh my broken heart

La la la la you did break my heart

I can't breathe or think or even sleep at night

I keep crying without knowing the wrong from the right

Can't handle it anymore, it is tearing me apart

And now I stand alone, with only a broken heart

La la la la oh my broken heart

La la la la you did break my heart

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I don't know if the "la la la la" part was a casual jab at those who may see your emotions or pain as immature in age or reason, but you are a beautiful girl who writes from the heart, and that makes it all the worth-while being on this poetry site!! I have felt this way "as your poem eludes to" when I moved, when loved ones died and left me here, and from a special few who knew only loss of life would be a stronger emotion that getting closer to me!! It pains me to think upon such things now, and most are gone because of those decisions, Cara. I'm glad you are here, my beautiful friend..... xoxo -Mark

[WingsToFly]

sweet and emotional. :)

[Cara]

thanks ^_^

[dunnia]

very nice and emotional

[Cara]

thank you

[Ana Drake]

I love the passion portrayed here. It's really good. You should consider putting some music behind it, like an instrumental. :)

[Cara]

thank you,i am considering the music thing, yet i haven't found the right one yet ;) thank you again

[DrD]

Hey, maybe the guy didn't know what to say. Maybe he was too devastated. You were the one leaving, remember? I have to defend the guys here 'cause no one else does.

[Cara]

oh i didn't think of it that way, but you know it hurts when you have to walk away from the one you love and he don’t say a thing, except only that he agrees that I have to go.
Thanks' for reading

[Persona]

It's really good and I like how angry you come across! You expressed that well. Your teas started to fall? That's the only error

[Cara]

oh sorry i meant tears
thanks, it means alot

[Persona]

You're welcome

[quinfinn]

i couldn't count the times this has happened to me on both hands because i would run out of fingers. it is a very sad and frustrating place to be and you have taken the reader there in this wonderful write. nice job!

[Cara]

thank you, and im sorry it happend to you alot

[EileenMarie]

Pretty but sad and so often happens! Nice flow :) Great poem

[Cara]

thank you