smile

Don’t forget to smile

Keep your head held high

Don’t ever stop breathing

Keep your hope alive

 

Be proud of who you are

Don’t change to a different star

You can always be the moon

Just don’t forget to smile

Author's Note

not my best, but hope you like it

Reviews

[¿]

I love to smile, to make smile, to keep smiling!!...and this made me SMILE!!
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((((SMILE)))

[Cara]

I'm glad it made you smile XD and I'm glad you like it

[¿]

You're ♡edly welcome ;))

[quinfinn]

i love this. it touches and sinks in in just the proper proportions. and i love the moon, i revere the moon. it is my guiding heavenly body.....wonderful little poem.

[Cara]

thanks

[Imagine Blade]

It's short, but you ca ignore that because of how powerful it delivers the message. It definitely is a must red for those who feel like disowned, beaten or trampled by the world. It's a meaningful poem that can raise the hope of anyone who reads it.

Just the title alone can get to you.

Simple but magnificent.

SMILE.

Thanks for this read!

[Cara]

thank you

[WingsToFly]

A cute short poem :)

[Cara]

thank you

[Sid]

Nice write, I like the hope it expresses, in this world with it's many challenges a smile is indeed what we need, thank you for reminding me of that...great write!!

[Cara]

thank you

[Daniel Eckert]

If this, "isn't your best" I would love to read your best. This is a very good piece; I enjoyed the read.

[Cara]

thanks, means alot

[Salar Majak]

it's pretty sis, has the taste of hope to it :),you should read more to expand your vocabulary and keep writting :) love ya