smile

Don’t forget to smile

Keep your head held high

Don’t ever stop breathing

Keep your hope alive

 

Be proud of who you are

Don’t change to a different star

You can always be the moon

Just don’t forget to smile

Author's Note

not my best, but hope you like it

Reviews

[¿]

I love to smile, to make smile, to keep smiling!!...and this made me SMILE!!
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((((SMILE)))

[Cara]

I'm glad it made you smile XD and I'm glad you like it

[¿]

You're ♡edly welcome ;))

[Bargavi]

It's simple and nice lines cara

[Cara]

Thank you for reading XD

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Cara! : )
It's Richard, come to return your visit.
Well, it's simple and direct, but filled to overflowing with meaning and beauty, obviously, faithfully reflecting your deeper inner thoughts and feelings.
A nice moral, too, for one to honor themselves as they are, while dreaming a little of other wondrous possibilities.
I hope you're keeping safe in your beautiful, but troubled, homeland.
Thank you sincerely, Cara, for sharing your lovely and inspiring poetic skills! ⁓ Richard

[Cara]

Hi Richard
thank you for your kindness and i'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem
Cara

[Richard🖌]

It was wonderful, Cara⁓*

[Cara]

thank you XD

[ciara anders]

its really nice and simple.

[Cara]

thank you ^_^

[ciara anders]

your welcome

[InsanityWriter]

Very sweet. ^_^ Nicely done! (;

[Cara]

thank you ^-^

[Green]

This is really good. The shortest poems are always the best and since it's harder to say important things in fewer words I always appreciate the thought behind them.
I liked the whole space theme in the second half. :)

[Cara]

thank you ^_^

[Lina Grey]

short and sweet! everyone's so busy trying to be each other and to be the best and brightest they don't realize that the only person worth being is themself, and that thye should do it proudly. This definately raises spirits right to the stars and gives reason to smile. ~em

[Cara]

soo true, thanks

[Patrick Henry]

I love most anything that deals with the space above us or just below the star ceiling. The wondrous span of space and dream where we can ride the astral plane forever in thought and through poem..... Cara it's a very pretty poem to read. When you start to think of more words to describe one specific thought, mood, or action..... your boundary of what to write about and how to write, will just grow!! Nice job.... Beautiful Cara. xoxo -Mark

[Cara]

thak you mark :)

[Ana Drake]

Short and sweet, I like it. I kind of seems like something that would be carved on a piece of wood and hung in my grandmas kitchen :)

[Cara]

thank you

[dunnia]

Awwww this is soo cute i love it

[Cara]

awwww than you ^_^