Love

for those people who don't realise they are special

 I love
when rain pounds the earth
for days and days
relentless
letting all the little insignificant burns and streams
feel what its like
to be a river
powerful and wide
for just a little while.

That same sensation
of pride and meaning
beyond my gift
and senses
I felt that day
when I heard you say;
"I love you".

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"feel what its like
to be a river
powerful and wide
for just a little while."

A very nice poem. I like those lines the most...:).....................

[Frieda P]

Oh *sigh* you had me from the start with 'rain pounds the earth'....tickles the senses and touched my heart, lovely paulo.

[Pól]

thank u, Frieda

[Emberlorna]

So very heart touching.. The imagery is truly amazing that I literally felt every line. A lovely read of love Paulo, thank you for sharing :))

[Pól]

thanks, Steph