Pyramid

Pyramid

A Poem by Pól

Life's short

play the game

ignore the rules.

© 2013 Pól


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I do agree with your these 3 words...life's really very damn short and before it's too late we gotta live it as we want to and break the rules because rules always stop you doing freely what you wanna do but do in a sensible manner without hurting others' only good way to live the life and breaking the rules which're made by human. Great imaginary.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is just another way of saying that nice girls finish last. You said it very well!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's the short stuff that packs the biggest punch I think. If one flinches too quickly...poof, the opportunity is gone. Rules are for playing it safe. Unfortunately one needs to risk a little injury to fulfill a dream or two.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muse

11 Years Ago

no lol...poof as in smoke. like a cigarette...it burns away all to quickly.
Pól

11 Years Ago

I know - just messing
Muse

11 Years Ago

ha ha I know
Exactly, perfection on the page, great little ditty paulo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My pleasure paulo, nice to see you again....
Pól

11 Years Ago

yeah- could'nt think of anything to write for ages
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Shyte happens, just glad to see you back. ;-)

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