F**k all

Nothing to say

nothing to write

"F**k, f**k, f**k!"

those three little words

she said

head in hands

heart in mouth.

 

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Such a simple flow of words, yet in it's simplicity it creates a powerful scene. The image i get is of a woman who's just watched someone close plummet off a cliff or something and they simply lose all mental and emotional cohesion, dropping to their knees, they scream.

Very nicely constructed. Normally I dislike the use of cursing in poetry, but this was executed very well and made a very large impact. Nice ink!

Aaron - Wolfwind

[Pól]

Thanks aaron