The light

A tortured soul

resless of spirit

fleeting thoughts

and frequent regrets

simmer and stew

and suddenly boil

as you ponder a life

Spent

pursuing nonsense

ignoring what's real

to extinguish the light.

Reviews

[Thomas Kainaroi]

I really like the structure of this writing. There's a lot of power and emotion in its compactness.

[Pól]

Thanks Thomas. Personally i think its crap, but I put it on anyway. Glad you liked it.