Stupid f*****g morons

stupid f*****g pricks

making rules, deciding fates

judging others

parasitic destruction

of evil constuction

whilst never themselves

taking a step.

In their wake

lies

a trail of broken promise

bright minds dimmed

bright eyes blurred

by confidence 

borne of ineptitude

idiotic superiority 

borne of chance

arrogance without foundation.

The blind lead 

those who See,

Do, 

Create

despite those stupid stupid f*****g dicks.

© Paul O' Neill 2013

Reviews

[Calo]

I see why I favoured this: a portrait of social media

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wow.. powerful imagery and words that explode off the page.. very well done.

[Pól]

Thank u v much, Lori

[quinfinn]

seems you wrote with great conviction. i think you have found the root of destruction...well done...you left out a major part of the equation though....the major f*****g c***s....to blame it all on the dicks is only half the equation...after all, what's good for the goose is good for the gander.....we don't create without them, so their choices are tantamount to the outcome....equal rights, right? yeh, take credit where it is due.....great write.

[Pól]

Thanks Q, glad u liked it

[quinfinn]

absolutely

[Frieda P]

I really wish you'd be more upfront with your feelings and tell us how you really feel!

[Pól]

Yeah- i know - some day i'm just gonna explode!!

[Frieda P]

Nah keep writing poetry my friend, it's all good...I imploded once, it wasn't pretty...

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Hmm, this seems rather familiar. Like I remember it oh too well ;)

[Pól]

You've had a similar experience?

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Just the other day, my friend. It started with gombeggar, then Emily, Jkhatz and a few others tried to gang up on me. I weren't having none of it ;)

[Pól]

Congrats on ur position of top writer, Mr D. it seems to have been the preserve of the Bris + Irish of late.
will u be penning aomething about Woolich?

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Thank you, my friend. Oh, doesn't it just. I actually wrote a piece on the day of the event, I just haven got round to publishing it as of yet :)

[Pól]

look forward to reading that one

[Tate Morgan]

The blind don't lead the sighted around here I see.
100/100 period

[Pól]

Wasn't about them,Tate, honestly. But the similarities are evident.

[Tate Morgan]

I thought it very interestingly similar

[Holly Mason]

arrogance without foundation- just love this
idiotic superiority- hey just don't let them in on it...they will never figure it out*)
it does dim a mind rather harshly
great title choice
thank you for sharing...

[Pól]

thanks so much

[Muse]

I see I missed some fun while at work...the thread was deleted before I could read any of it. :(

[Pól]

Yeah, Serah always does that when shes taking a pasting. Was fun while it lasted.

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I love this, it sounds like something kimmer would say xD Where have you been, good sir?? I've missed you. Or, perhaps it is I who has been away...Either way, so glad to have read this. It made me cringe and smile all at once. Yay you!

[Pól]

I took a break- been away for a few months K. Looked in today, penned this silliness and immediately got into a row with a nutjob. I'm back!!
Made a nice new friend too- good to see there's some normal people here

[KAOlmsted]

Welcome back...you were missed by moi ;-)

[s y e]

Ha, the title made me laugh! :P This was a great write, full of anger and really powerful, well done Paulo.