U

U give me

a reason for living

hope in my heart

a spring in my step

love in my heart

I don't have to name u

u know who u are.

 

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2013

Reviews

[lisat]

Short and sweet.

[redflutterby]

LOVE this!! The simplest poems often express the most emotion!! Wonderful write!

[JenniferMarie]

This is very pretty or nicely written I should say. I hope the person you write of was able to read this. I'm sure she would feel truly cared for.

[Pól]

thank you, JM. It was nice of you to read my U

[JenniferMarie]

You're welcome. I'm happy to read writing by fellow poets.

[Neville]

U have a certain way
U is very concise but
Says a lot more than
one might first think

I truely hope U knows
& appreciates this work,
I certainly did. N

[Pól]

what is it they say about brevity, Neville??

[Neville]

brevitively speaking, they say a lot about it paulo but there is hardly enough time or space here for me to go into detail, All Good Things, Neville

[Muse]

I'm hoping some April showers will produce a SPRING in my step.

:D

[Pól]

but unfortunately, Muse, its only January.

[Summer]

So very charming.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

hmm emotional conviction, I like it.

[Circe]

my heart unravels before your words......

[Carolann Dowsett]

So lovely, to find someone who means that to you is the best. Lovely poem.

[Pól]

thank u, C

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)