Love

I trod this earth many a year joy and pain In equal measure, tasted. But love, true love I knew only when a Goddess from another world my path, crossed entering my life and made me wish that I, too was immortal.

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2012

Reviews

[s y e]

Ah the feeling of separation is really hard. It's hard to deal with when you're alone. For me it's bad enough being away from my boyfriend all the time but being separated or something is just unbearable for me, he is my life. :)

[Pól]

Awww thats nice- hope he returns soon

[s y e]

He's moving up here within the next few years. :)

[Pól]

Sassanach?

[s y e]

What?

[Pól]

Is he english?

[s y e]

Yep. :)

[Pól]

Make sure the kids are Scotch!!

[s y e]

Haha, of course! 100%

[Clara]

That feeling of separation... can be too real. :(

[Pól]

thanks, Squishy

[Clara]

Welcome. :)

[Renée]

this is simple & so lovely....

[Pól]

Just like me!!

[Renée]

the roaster crows lol

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Huh... This one pours salt on an open wound
loved it!!

[Pól]

S**t- sorry

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

No please don't apologize! However in my story... She was mortal
May she rest in peace

[Pól]

Really sorry

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Please don'y apologize... a really good write btw

[Pól]

Just beautiful mo chara.
Big smile on my face,
Idyllic poetry.

[Pól]

Thank u my friend

This was so out of another era... I loved it.

[Pól]

Awwww - thanks & glad u enjoyed it

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautiful, to be so in love with someone that they seem unearthly to you. I love this

[emmajoy]

I immediately thought of one name! Smooth brief lines, warm thoughts, total adoration.

[Circe]

takes my whole breath away with its perfection... you are a true romantic! remarkable poem!