Da dum

This is about someone who is beautiful inside and out.

One could be distracted,

perhaps get lost

in those eyes

whilst pondering

why does my heart begin to race

beating faster; da dum da dum da dum da dum

as you enter the room

is this the rythme of desire?

I gaze upon your face, tender

innocent lips supporting a mischievous smile

the most lovely thing I've ever seen

mirroring the beauty of your soul

and the warmth of you heart

that beats

da dum da dum da dum da dum.

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2012

Reviews

[Circe]

reading your poems is my addiction :)

[s y e]

One word: AMAZING!
Well done!

[Pól]

thanks. N

[s y e]

Welcome!

[Circe]

what a super hot room.. it's getting too steamy there! gorgeous poem, my heart is making the same sound!

[Pól]

I'm so pleased that you liked this

[Circe]

your words are full of surprises

[Pól]

Hopefully nice surprises

[Circe]

indeed most pleasant!

[Emberlorna]

This is so beautiful... You expressed dramatic emotions that touch the soul in this wondrous poem. Such a lovely write . . !!

[Pól]

aaww- thanks

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh Paulo, infatuation strikes when beauty creates itself in the minds eye, and desire creeps in to commit cognitive theft. Good write. Where have you been lately or am I just out of touch?

[Pól]

Beautiful :)

Hearts láidre,
Buille ...

Beat níos tapúla

Than ;) go leor....


Nice piece! keep on writing mo chara!

[Pól]

Go raibh mile maith agat, mo chara.

:)

[KAOlmsted]

*blush* Thank you so much for writing this for me, paulo!! *laugh*

:-D

Really pretty poem...very nicely done.

[Pól]

thanks K