Début*

Take this life

in your hands

skin soft, sunkissed

shake it up

dust scatter

let it fall

to the ground

fresh and new

not born again

but reborn

in a better light

pick it up

live it

to the full

with me.

 

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2012

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Paulo, there is youth and optimism in this life which your offering desctribes. I like this poem. Thanks.

[Circe]

ahhh this is sweet scented air I am breathing.. beautifully invigorating, a grand debut, life can give you many sublime chances.

[Pól]

thank u Circe