I

Internal affairs, Intrinsic beliefs

intertwine with

Inherent fears

invoking

Innate subliminal reality

 

Interior motives

intuitively gaze.

Inwordly fracturing

inner subconchoidal cracks

Ideas seeping through,

individual fissures.

 

Intelligent logical thought,

impossible; A grim reality

Implausable guilt,

inbuilt, intact, inside

I

 

 

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2012

Reviews

[Heather]

I really liked this poem, espeicially interior motives... as all motives are in fact interior, we never do something without looking within ourselves first for what we truely want. i loved the choices of each word and how they spoke directly to me, but of course, it is I who read the poem and I who liked it. So glad I read this.

[Pól]

& I am so glad u did.

[KAOlmsted]

I...so many sentences begin with that one single letter...

You did this beautifully, paulo;it didn't feel like you just flipped through the dictionary and scribbled a bunch of words beginning with the ninth letter of the alphabet, yeah? Every word has a place and meaning...and that they all have to do with the inner workings of self, well, that just puts the icing on the cake for me.

Where the hell have you been, anyway?

-kimmer

[Pól]

hi kimmer
Have been v. busy of late so not on too much. Thankks for your...ahem...kind review.

[Circe]

hmm interesting and confronting.... the I is like the one for self... can definitely see these characteristics playing out in my mind too!

[Pól]

I suspect these sort of thoughts are in most peoples minds, but because they are stored in the subconscious we may well be totally unaware of them.