Twist

You twist you turn as a trout on the end of my line jumping and splashing the water thrashing as I drag you in.

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2012

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a wonderfully expressed dual nature of both nature and the written word~

[Pól]

Thank u S, as always u r far too kind. This came into my head & i. Posted it 4 safekeeping. Its prob a stanza for a longer piece yet to b written, rather than a poem in its own right. I'm glad it pleased u.