Feckless fools

Feckless fools

A Poem by Pól

I sat

in my lair

listening,

at first a distant patter

then harder, louder

batter, batter, batter

drumming its steady,

insistent beat

on glass cymbals

that frame my world,

throwing light

on my troubled mind.

 

I close my eyes,

relax,

allow the rythm

to fill my senses

a dull aching pain,

yet pleasant,

as a memory

long forgotten

flits across my mind, 

chased away

by the feckless fools

who's companionship

 

I endure.

 

 

© Paul O' Neill 2012

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Pól


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Liked this alot!

Posted 12 Years Ago


one can actually hear the rhythmic cadence of the emotive drops~

Posted 12 Years Ago


NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

12 Years Ago

HOW'D YOU KNOW???? Lol!!! exactly!
Pól

12 Years Ago

Mind-reader
NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

12 Years Ago

oh oh =)~

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