hurt

hurt

A Poem by Secret Thoughts
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just memories

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I once felt a love so strong 
I truly felt what could go wrong 
only you I found to be true 
until things turned to blue 
only the hope I once held 
slowly all went to hell 
you left me hear broken and bruised 
all you did was torment and abuse 
I wasn't sure that I could ever be strong 
but I was able to prove you wrong
now I stand with someone new 
never again will I be abused 

© 2018 Secret Thoughts


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I agree with Unknown, this write is very deep. At some point I completely melted into this poem "Slowly all went to hell" This is every heartbreak in a nutshell (I'm hopefully not bashing your emotions, just saying that this correlates to many).

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is Deep, it hits a spot that many people have been in

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Just memories - preserved in a good way...will never rot and you'll always learn from past and build the beautiful today!
Just a bit of carefulness is needed so that the new one doesn't gets out of hand....take care...Nice read😊!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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