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definitely the closest to the first lyrics i ever wrote

 

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Dressed to kill or dressed to tear my heart out

It's Saturday and I'm bleeding out my heart and soul

Words I don’t even know the meaning off

Words are all I can do to make you see

Actions failed me last time

Life breaking in front of my eyes

You’re walking away and I'm finding it hard to follow

You’re walking away and I'm standing still

 

Oh, oh, oh, oh

You don’t know what I'm feeling

The stars they shine and sing of my sorrow

When I'm dead and gone I won't be remembered

Oh, oh, oh, oh

You don’t even notice the holes in my heart wrists and mind

The stars they shine and sing of my sorrow

When I'm dead and gone don’t bury me with this heavy heart,

Heavy heart

 

I'm walking back and forth closer to the edge

I'm trembling with the force of these thoughts in my head

Breaking through the darkness and in to the light

Only to find out the sun is saying goodbye

Oh, oh, oh, oh

 

Oh, oh, oh, oh

You don’t know what I'm feeling

The stars they shine and sing of my sorrow

When I'm dead and gone I won't be remembered

Oh, oh, oh, oh

You don’t even notice the holes in my heart wrists and mind

The stars they shine and sing of my sorrow

When I'm dead and gone don’t bury me with this heavy heart,

Heavy heart

 

Heavy heart and you’re really not helping

Just reaching in and tearing apart

The pieces and parts of my life

Heavy heart just breaking apart this is my song and I've lost all the words

You’re in the room tearing apart my life my life without words

I'm just saying goodbye to you and me

I'm starting again without this heart

I’m Starting again without this heavy heart

Author's Note

one of the first....

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

You should call this poem "Heavy Heart". ^^

Anyways, I think this a great start if it your first shot at lyrics. It makes me wish I knew how the tune went. But nonetheless, I'm honored to read these words and be the first to say that this is just excellent.

Few grammar/spelling errors, but that can be fixed any time. :) The content seems to cover a number of things and really gets the reader thinking about countless depressing problems at once, as if the narrator is ready for a suicide. ;)

Great work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood