be quiet (look at my eyes)

be quiet (look at my eyes)

A Poem by shane
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still in the making

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Quiet, quiet now, look at me
Always silent through the tears
Backing away from what I fear
Never trying, forever giving up to you
 
Your hands around my neck
Choking me
Telling me you love me
You just want me to speak
 
Be quiet now and just listen
Listen to how I move
 To how I speak
And to how I act
There’s no other way
I can tell you
 
You say that you care for me
I've heard it all before
Not just from you but everyone else
Forcing me into this
You say it's for the best
Why don’t you believe me?
I do
Why don’t you just listen to how I live and breathe each day?
 
Be quiet now and just listen
Listen to how I move
How I speak
And to how I act
There’s no other way
I can tell you
 
 
Quiet, quite, quiet now
Just look into my eyes
Through the tears
And through these fears
I want you to see how I feel
I want you to be there for me
Not pushing me onto someone else
Rescue me
From you

© 2008 shane


Author's Note

shane
still in the making, i think i just wrote it in the space of ten mins after listen take the floor by go audio

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I really like this, althought sad and raw with emotion.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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shane
shane

galway, Ireland



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Shane, 21 Years old so far. Most of what i post on here are lyrics, i should say that i have never really been interested in poetry, the first poem i wrote was written last year ('09) i found you, .. more..

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