WANTING MORE

about my best friend

I know were just friend but I want to be more,

Everything about you I just can't help to adore.

 

Even if your features change,

I'll still love you cause inside your the same.

 

When its just me and you,

Its nice to have just us two.

 

But when were in public you treat me like s**t,

No Iwont calm down and get over it.

 

I will love you all the same,

But I don't want this to be a game.

 

I love you but this thing called love,

It takes two.

 

And I know I love you,

Even if you don't love me too.

 

I hope we can still be friends,

Just don't forget me in the end.

 

Reviews

[Sound]

It reminds me about a predicament my best friend is in right now with a close friend of his. Kind of sad watching from the side lines, but my words are often ignored.

[Emily]

Bittersweet, it seems. Some nice lines, but watch your capitalization. Unless you're choosing not to capitalize "i" for stylistic reasons. If that's the case, the purpose of that isn't reading in the poem, so you could develop that further. Overall, well done.

[~Qu33n B~]

I love this. Thank you sooooooooo much for posting this because i was JUST talking about my feelings for a certain best friend. Great writing!

~Qu33n B Cullen~