love to no end

the things we do for love!!

Do you love me, Do you not,

You told me once but I forgot.

Do you think the gods chose you from all the rest,

Because they knew I'd love you best.

I had heart this much is true,

But it went from me to you.

So take good care of it as I've done,

For you have two and I have none.

And if I die before you do,

I'll go to heaven and wait for you.

And if your not their come judement day.

I'll give them back their golden wings,

silver herps and other things.

And just to prove my love is true,

I'll even go to hell for you.

Now since I'll do all that for you,

Will you do something for me too.

From me to you just one command,

Will you please hold my hand.

Cause in my heart I know its true,

That you love me and I love you.

 

Reviews

[Sound]

Nice poem.

[~Qu33n B~]

This is a brilliant poem. I love it!! I love the flow, except you did lose one small line, but it is still excellent. Thankyou for posting and sharing! Great poem!!

~Qu33n B Cullen~

[Xavier Honre]

Great poem! You do lose a single line of rhyme "And if your not their come judement day." You might consider adding a following line to keep the flow. Even the way it is, it's a fantastic poem!