Help part 2

She is gone.

She asked for help but you ignored her.

You called her a attention w***e. 

Why? 

Nobody helped her so the demons decided to take control.

Filling her mind with thoughts that made her mind even darker.

Telling her she was worthless.

She knew you heard her cry for help.

She also knew you chose to ignore. 

Now she's gone.

Forever.

Nobody cared about her.

That's what she was told.

So she ended it with a blade.

She fell into the hole and cut her arm over and over again. 

Until she got dizzy.

With a tear falling down her face she fell to the floor.
Her last thought was...

Why didn't you help me.

Reviews

[Daniel Rodriguez]

it hurts more to me, when its preventable. Even more so in this case that she seemed to have wanted to be saved. This part 2 felt more polished and simpler than part one. That being said part 1 was good, I like the return of the demonic imagery, in the cases not so much the demons of hell claiming her soul but the voice that makes us ignorant to reason or logic. I know the voice that says "it won't get better" and "they don't really care". I know what it's like when you want to say, yes, your right. But I won't leave this review on a dark note, instead I will say, this is a good poem, it reaches several points that impacted me as a reader. And as a wannabe writer that likes a story snd character, she does feel real, and that is why this works so well.