Angelic Emo Wings

Swift and Sacred, what beauty am I.

I am the angel in the confused, lit sky.

Wondering and suffering from a love

So cold, so deep in me. I will fly above

 

All withered hearts. I wait for a soul

With a heart of fire. His soul is like burning coal

To calm the freezing soul in me. Snow is falling.

I am aching. I need my warm summer sun.

 

A soul so close to mine. Will I get to

hold it forever beside me? What do

I say to make you stay? Yes, I need you.

No, I don't like you. I love this soul of yours.

 

Each ache, each break of my heart

Pulls me closer to you. Is this love a part

Of you, or just a part of me. What do

I say to make you stay, other than I love you.

Author's Note

ok. well i realized i had a crush on my best friend. what can i say. you can comment, rate, review.

Reviews

[M.Kilani]

not too forced rhyme .. still it's good ... the content is somehow weak, lacks some images though I like the fact it's simple and honest ... reminds me of my own style of writing .
well done

[Ali_Avery~7]

aww buddy! this one's sooooo sweet lol Its crazy how love can be so scary :} beautiful poem love it

-QG

[The Analog Kid]

This does have some depth to it despite being a love poem. The ending is real good. These themes continue to come up in life. They are great material for writing. I get a lot of mileage out of them myself.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good write. I liked it a lot. I have had a crush on a friend before. It might never work out, but if he likes you too then he will always respect you. Thanks for sharing. :)