The Loving One

um i put myself in the point of view of a black panther, and also put my life in the poem.

My fur is like dark, black night

when the moon hides under skies of mourning stain.

My eyes glow and give you light

to freedom in this freightning reign

of life. I'm forced to protect myself.

 

My heart lies in these mountains of mine

that time quickly erodes away.

My eyes still glow for you, but time

is eroding my heart away. Stay

away from this hunger of mine.

 

I am found near a stream on

a sweet land. The peace it brings is heavenly.

I'm drifting from this erosion

and dreaming of lands that once evenly

spread throughout this heart of mine.

 

My predator senses tell me to seek

revenge on a kind unlike my own,

but secretly I'm scared to speak.

I guess I"ll just let time ruin precious stone.

I know that sweet erosion will soon set me free.

 

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Excellent creativity and great job on the imagery. So nicely done.

[Orlando Murcia]

Very creative

Wonderful write

Thank you for sharing