Tempting Emotions

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When you feel like you're empty,

it leaves you crying on the ground.

You're left feeling so wreary,

wondering when someone will notice

you're down. Someone who wil pick you

up. That's why it's so hard to focus.

When I care I always show it. I

will always give. I am supposed to.

I can't expain the meaning of life,

except for the feeling of being close to

a certain guy, It's my way of life,

so now I will drown myself in work.

I will force myself to carry on although

it hurts. I have known every single jerk.

I am supposed to understand life, but

it's hard when I'm trapped in this place.

I am meant to always give, so here

is to my suffering ways. Give space,

you're left feeling unloved, but atleast

it's easier to get through life.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

A well expressed write. Nicely done.

[Daniel Gardner]

Very good. I can tell it was written from your heart and not just because.

[Karla Bardanza]

Great write.Truly enjoyed it.

[The Analog Kid]

Just "your" correct usage. Very heartfelt poem.

Patrick