Stalker

Stalker

 

When he first caught sight of her,

David was instantly hypnotized.

He approached her, and said a line,

Resulting win beer splashed

Upon his face; He was distraught,

And spiraled into a deep depression.

So he hunted down her address,

And every night watched her

In a crazed frenzy of emotions,

Imagining that she loved him too.

He saw her one day, going to work,

With a briefcase in her hand.

He knew what he must do.

After watching her for so long,

David yearned to be touched by her.

Suddenly, he jumped in her path,

Convulsing and clutching his throat.

She shrieked, dropping her briefcase

As she ran to him, calling for help.

He began to induce his gag reflax,

And she put her delicate arms

Around him from behind, as she proceeded

To perform the Heimlich maneuver.

She started panicking when he seems dead,

So she turned him over on his back

Hyperventilating, calling for help

He opened his eyes and whispered

To her, I love you. Widened were her eyes

As she watched the police

Dragging him away.

Reviews

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I liked this! I especially liked the mid-beginning:

"...He was distraught,
And spiraled into a deep depression.
So he hunted down her address,
And every night watched her
In a crazed frenzy of emotions,
Imagining that she loved him too."

Very nice, little, odd story! XD

[Teenage poet]

This is really creepy yet it expresses the point and fact of a stalker is watching her. I love this like "Convulsing and clutching his throat." its one of my favorites. I also love how you use such powerful words.