Love at First Sight

For a contest.

 

Love at First Sight

 

 

There you sat in front of me

Gazing at your hazel eyes

It seemed like love at first sight

Your gorgeous image stunned me

Clean cut black hair, a handsome face

What more could I want?

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Helena]

This poem reminded me of a moment in time just like that.
The time I met my first love when a teenager.....many moons ago!
He actually had black hair too, but brown eyes! lol

Thanks for entering this into my challenge! ~ Helena

[angelina neves]

Lovely!

[Helena]

Yes, what more could you want? He sounds gorgeous!
A lovely romantic piece ....so what more could I want?!

Thank you Dana for submitting this to Sal's "Auden Tanka" contest! ~ Helena :)

[EmpressPoetess]

Lovely poetry with a great flow! It left me wanting more!

[Cam]

Love at first sight, how we all feel it at times.
I think you did a good job presenting it.
Not complicated, and presents it well.
Great Job :D