Back to Katsu

it's time for you to return, back to Katsu with you.

 

Staring down into space,

my eye catches

 a magical place

 

Fairies and knights,

squires with kites

blue butterflies and an army of mice

 

 Castles galore

with dragons ashore

light up the sky

with the sound of a

Roar

 

Banquets take place

all through the night

as the children of Katsu

rest in their nests

 

Kings and queens bask in glory

while poor beggars roam the crooked aisles

of the small vermin penatrated town  

 

Its here you belong,

back in your own story

so don’t dawdle and go

 

A bird waits below

 to guide you home,

so jump

 

Take a chance

& return to your home,

in your own story,

in Katsu

Author's Note

Say it how you think it!

Reviews

[Aurora Night]

Creates great images in my head, but for some reason doesn't catch my eye.

[Katy Otto]

I really like the free spirit and heppy feeling in this poem,
Great write!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I think you did a good job with rhymes, none of which are forced or contrived. Good poem.

[Wicahpi]

Delightful :)

[Mason Vail]

I'd like to visit this place. Where do I get a ticket?
This reminds me of many of my daydreams from years ago before "real life" crowded out the fantasy world(s) in my head. Seriously, where do I get a ticket?

[Anita B Jacques]

A beautiful poem, a very smooth write to an enchanting world, I love it. The line before last I would put "own" instead of "on", Keep them coming, God Bless,

[fallendemonofmercy]

that's an interesting thing to see another world in another place in another 'place'
creative and visual