Memories

What do you always remember?

 

Through better or worse,

laughter or sorrow,

memories always remain

of both good and bad,

memories always remain

through heart break and happiness,

memories always remain

no matter how old or new,

memories always remain sincere in your heart

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Anita B Jacques]

A nice write. Memories, good or bad, some we wish we could forget. Thank you for sharing your poem with us, you have talent, keep them flowing my friend. God bless you
Hugs....Annie

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Lovely Poem Dana, thank you for sharing.

Dana...it's true that memories are what sustain us in life when you get to be my age...however...it's a tragedy that many...when they reach this stage of life...don't have that luxury. Memories don't always remain.

The devil's tool, Altzheimers disease, rears its ugly head about this time for some. Their vacant stares, their inability to recognize loved ones, etc., etc., is a travesty in this modern age. If we concentrated on elminating this dreadful scourge as much as we do on developing ipods, blackberry's, toys that talk etc., etc., what a boon it would be for mankind!

Beatrice Boyle (Grandma Bea)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Memories always play a vital role in everyone's life and you have depicted about that so beautifully here in your words..
Great work!

[Cam]

Memories are a necessity for me.
Without them, it might be very hard to continue in this world.
Too bad that we have some very painful memories, but still wish to remember them.
Great write :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Memories are invaluable, so I've found--especially the good ones. Without them, we'd be awful lonesome.

[Wicahpi]

Well done, though, some memories can be lost :(
Hopefully found again with a trigger of some kind.
Nicely done.

[M Bester]

Very true your words, memories never leave we just put them away till we need them.
"memories always remain sincere in your heart" I so agree with you here, the mind always clutters memories, however the heart never does.
It is an amazing poem with a good ending, I would say don't stop with your writing. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Wolfwind Words]

A nice smooth flow too a topic that I agree with whole heartedly. Memories are what we experience and it's those experiences that carve us into who we are now. We as mortals will have our share of ups and down goods and bads, which is just the way it is. The highs lift us to new levels of insight and joy. The lows we learn to climb from and grow.

A wonderful piece!

Aaron

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I have no experience in writing, much less in critiquing, but I enjoyed the heart felt sound of "What do you always remember?" Hoping to learn from everyone, I enjoyed your poem
Thank you very much!


Raphael

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Very well written and heart felt! I love how you put the separations and punctuation in this poem.

Good job!

~Phoenix~