F*ck Me Up (Like a masterpiece)

F*ck Me Up (Like a masterpiece)

A Poem by Nina
"

to my dear Kyo, you make love to me through your music ;p I just get so crazy.

"
Toes curled and desert lips licked
A mess between clenched thighs and elevated hips
You're so good to me, angelic wildfire
Heart flapping like a caged bird, and when you scream
A hand reaching through my ribs to crush it
Ever so indelicately, the obscene monster that you are
That harsh beauty that rings through your pretty, vulgar mouth
Fingers slide down and nails scrape up when you howl
Bruise me, abuse me, bend me back against my ego
Tear me apart and make me your own
If I'd died and gone to hell I wouldn't know
Lips form O-shapes like oh. my. god. (yes, you are)
An ugly beauty or a beautiful ugly, before I couldn't tell
But, through my now lidless eyes, I see
You make ugliness taste divine.

© 2016 Nina


Author's Note

Nina
Just how I sometimes get during/after a trip listening to Dir en Grey

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Title caught my attention. I like the strong statements. They were direct and to the point. Complete poem was amazing. The ending was outstanding. A excellent poem. Thank you.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I must say that I am enjoying your writing. Your word choice just punches me in the face, and I love it.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devilish, i like it.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


I the flow and occasional rhyming lines make this a very easy read, while the imagery and diction make it a very interesting and pleasant read. I really like the two lines you chose to close this piece with. Awesome job.

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Added on April 24, 2010
Last Updated on April 11, 2016
Tags: music, intensity, kyo, sex

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Nina

Seattle, WA



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