Weedsociety

What is insanity

Insanity the unbalanced portrait hangs, on...

To the outer walls of society

Frailties framed forefront halos

Surrounding the likes of you and me

Falling cross long night shadows 

Naked passive eyes of others

Pieces of a larger puzzle still ...

Smoke and mirrors each

 

Where lines to horizons thin and...

Abstract greys fit neatly in, between

Magic and miracles as dust

Underneath a rug all but go unseen

Witnessed solely by those souls'

That have some need to believe

Humanity daunting in our face suspends

The self we cannot reach

 

Still ,there are more and more

Who learn if not stumble upon the secret art

Overcoming conscience and emotion 

Venture from the bubble into mastery

Our unveiling...

Is to the greatest human strengths

Hidden brass rings amidst the fluctuation

Even unto weeds of sanity

 

But, madness seems to be

The saddened forever crying clown

Continues on…

Foolishly fooling itself

Into believing in its own
Quixotic illusions

Accepting at its core

To be a common wealth

 

And so I say “tell me why?”

Shouldn’t futility… try

Author constitution

Writing a whole new reality

Because in the end isn’t norm

Just another twisted form

Of crap! Which spews forth..

Out of mouths, those whom try and take our lead

                                 

Reviews

[Wendy Sue]

This provokes thought, observation. I like it very much. Your structure is beautiful, with an ole time feel to your writing style.

Strange how counterproductive labels are, yet they are given, oddly by humans, and doing so seems sadly inhumane.

[Michael G. Smith]

The homeless, mentally challenged or even that creepy person we avoid, who are we truly to makes judgements of their hearts and deem ourselves the normal ones? To me normal is a far greater madness. For I chose to embrace weirdness, lol. (As long as it doesn't get me in trouble). Thanks for taking time to come on by. The tea is on me.

[DarkTruth]

Very imaginative and extremely powerful with your words here.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you for taking the time out to share your insights with me.

[DarkTruth]

No problem, glad it was welcomed.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Michael, this is beautiful, powerful, and incredibly imaginary...It begs us to look into the mind of the insane and see what they see...Very insightful, great word usage. It was captivating.
Thank you.

[Saddam]

It is very powerful and great piece friend.
Last stanza gives it a perfection.
I love it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
powerful....wishful....thoughtful.....
it is all about perception.....
god help them who could only see as far as normal.
awesome write....
i loved it!!!
:)