Twisted Tales Of Love

Tales of love are twisted

Here we stand united; you and I

It was more of what I had insisted

And you read between the lines

In your heart wrote the words I had listed

Clichés of love is still blind

Without convincing you wouldn’t have wished this

But now you’ve seen all of the signs

What can I do my dearest

But, love you deep and hard till the end of time

At least to the sand that falls last

And the summer’s wind unwinds

Tales of love are twisted and ours is no different

Unless of course, all those years ago you would have declined

Reviews

[just Penny]

To write words "in your heart" is a lovely line. The acceptance of someone without trying to change them or turn them into something else is the real deal. The sincerity comes through loud and clear here. Nicely done. Penny :)

[Cassie]

Hi Mike, its been long since i read you, this is super...love it

[Michael G. Smith]

Well thanks for making it by Cassie.

[priya]

In love, you dont try dying for them,
but you die trying for them.
beautifully written. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

I like that. Good analogy. Thanks for the insight.

[priya]

my pleasure :)

[ms. barrie]

this is quite a thought-provoking poem, sincere poem...very heart felt.
amazing choice of words...and brilliantly executed write.
thank you for sharing! :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Joy. This comment means a lot.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, Sir Micheal :)

[Avinash]

Women are like nature...at times they are kind. Sometimes they change and leave our territory. Probably that's why god created them for us to know the life and understand it in much deeper way. We can only love them as much as we can and as long as we can, returning it is their prerogative.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks bud are your comments. I sent you a message but I don't know if it went through. I wanted to know if you could read my latest blog entry and let me know what you think.

[Avinash]

Please share the link as well.

[Michael G. Smith]

Tell how to do that. Past and copy into comment or message?

[Michael G. Smith]

I'll try doing tomorrow. I'm just heading to bed.