Amnesia Anesthesia

Amnesia

The best anesthesia

Against a cruel cruel world

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

There are times I wish to have that kind of remedy. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

I hear ya sister.

[Pryde Foltz]

Now there's a witty senyru. Sorry I just reviewing it now. Got lost in my mountains of RR's.

[Michael G. Smith]

No problem. I wasn't aware it was a senyu. Thanks for pointing that out.

[Pryde Foltz]

The syllable count is varied. But the Japanese didn't actually count. But it delivers a very concise message in three short lines. Bravo.

[Tiffany Boles]

Love the idea, much enjoyed. Nice write :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Tiffany.

[rutherford]

Like the A alliteration --

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Rutherford. Its a triple A poem.

[Frieda P]

Too bad you can't order the stuff............

[Michael G. Smith]

The over counter is pulling the covers over your head and refuse to get out of bed.

[Rita L. Sev]

Selective amnesia would indeed be a blessing...

[Michael G. Smith]

We men have it.

[Marie]

Absolutely..memories, even the good ones, are so unkind...

[Lilly]

Oh yes sometimes it would be wouldn't it...
the world can be so cruel at times
but then remember there's so much beauty in it too
Rather thought provoking for a short poem - nice work

[Michael G. Smith]

This is a "one of those days" poem.