Wilder Still the Wind

The sin of unmarital sex.

Wilder still the wind
A storm fools mentality
As it rages on within

 

Pretense of youth
Stretched all too thin
Untamed oats
Ne'er think much of sin

 

As it wails
Against such tender hearts
Of love
Amidst true, true friends

 

Wilder still the wind
Only ends, when
The conscience kills it dead

Reviews

[leafsailor]

Then the poem asks us to be aware of what we desire and wisdom is allowed to be among the choises

[Michael G. Smith]

More righteous in our decisions, thanks.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Ohhh the sins! sins are only placed there by society...Sewing wild oats in the wind is an animals nature ;-) great poem!

[Michael G. Smith]

It's all a choice, choose wrong or right, carnal? Me, I'll try to choose spiritual, eternal and not justify. Thanks for your review. Finding the other side of sin inspired me to write this

[TrimarcoRansome]

It's a good one! I agree that spiritual is a better path, what we find on that journey, if it inspires us then it has to be a good thing!