Standing Weak and falling Strong

It's the rot that eats at my soul

 Putrid is the smell of my failure

  Alone, i fall weak and stand strong.

The ugly is eating away at my being, 

All the pushing and shoving is too much

Break me down bit by bit 

There you will find the ugliness 

Shred my dignity and tell me 

I will always stand weak 

And there i shall fall strong

For you have brought me to my knees

The twist of my heart in your mind

I have broken down and shattered

Now rebuild me...

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The emissions of this piece lays out for the reader...
there is a voice within the lines as you go about the read...
makes you see through each stanza a feeling of what the motive is all about ---
never let's lose focus on the reign from start to finish...
the entirety catches with the ending...with the caption:

Now rebuild me...

[Sami Khalil]

I fall weak
and stand strong.
Well penned

[Tattered Teddy]

Amazing, love the rawness and the emotional pull of this piece.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

wonderful poem, Misty Blue Eyes! I liked so much the rhymes, the poetic flow, the idea of strength inside us, mixed with weakness, the contrasts and passions...and specially the end "now rebuild me" :)

[Meghan]

Beautiful. I loe the imagery in this piece. Great job!

[Dark Beauty]

Good writing although i was hoping it to be a little longer it just cut off at the ending for me but nice write!!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Impressived writing the title is the real soul of the poem...

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haunting and sad..but the title was superb..really loved it

[Alicia Hirshey]

beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strength in this poem. Strong statement making the purpose of the poem clear.
"The ugly is eating away at my being, "
Sometime we must dig through the B.S and find the good road. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote