Nights whispers

Shining stars and black silk lay upon the wishing well

Thoughts and whispers fill my head 

Closed eyes and voices so clear

hugging the blanket close and near i dream

Dream those soft whispers 

The nights grip on my body holds tight

Ears fill with nights whispers of love

Told stories of days to come and nights past

Nights whispers sooth agitated minds of wandering

Falling into a bed of white and yellow dreams 

Night whispers 

listen closely and you can hear them calling to you

Close your dreary eyes

let the whispers push you, push you higher

deeper into the sleeping realm 

cool breezes and soft thunder 

night whispers catch you falling from a cliff 

rock you to sleep and watch over you

Night whispers are always there.. if you listen

Author's Note

this is a poem done while i was really tired so if doesnt make any sense let me know..

Reviews

[NightShade]

A bewitching creature of verse. It reminds me of a Faery sleep enchantment, sure to leave one somnolent and drifting into the Dream Country; engulfed in soft lights as they follow willo' the wisps of the deep subconscious. Fitting that you were actually tired while writing this. One may encounter the best ride in a hypnogogic state...

[Mauricio Montoya]

cool!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Tirdness is also a strength of treasure hunting.. it is a treasure of your gallery well written poem.........

[Jazique]

It may not make complete sense to you but, its pretty good being half asleep and excellent description and the color like its all a dream. Anyways well done and thanks for the comment earlier. p.s. like the title and how it all corresponds.

[KAREN]

Beautiful! Makes me feel a sense of peace.
The poem kept me reading and reading and at the end, wanting more!!

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feels like falling into a dream nice write

[Dream Weaver]

You should be tired more often
great job....

[Tate Morgan]

That was really sweet and deeply thought out
!00/100

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I liked it! it has a soothing affect!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The secret the night hold is always a good reason for a poem. I like the description of the poem.
"let the whispers push you, push you higher
deeper into the sleeping realm "
If we really listen to the whispers of the night. We can learn many things. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[johnnyqueer]

This was so relaxing, like a fairy tale a mother would read to her child before tucking them in. This is very beautiful. I like your style :)