OH THE JOY!!!!!!!!

a random poem i had to get out of my head before i fell asleep tonight lol

Eyes open in the nights embrace

His arm protects her in the night

laying there naked, her cream colored pale skin

Her supple brown n*****s hard and cold 

The fan's humming next to her

watching the nights shadows flow through the walls of light

Sounds of the night's cars driving by 

The black clouds turned different colors under the moons light

The light breathing of her child in the crib dreaming sweet dreams

her husbands soft moaning in his sleep of happiness

he's not really here

All those nights alone

this has to be a dream and shes going to wake up

the thoughts that ran through her head

His arms around you, holding you tight.

He's home!!

He's here!!

He's breathing on me

He's Mine!!!

Reviews

[Jibey]

A poem of longing, which hit the mark.. The description of 'supple brown n*****s hard and cold' was arresting... needing some warmth, I think...

[J Todd Underhill]

Clifton Colorado, that's suburb if you will of Grand Junction eh? I have actually been there. Loved this poem, you are doing well for having started since joining.

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strong images with interesting descriptions..well done

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent write. I love the emotions here.

[Clay Feet]

I enjoy the joy you feel in the pleasure of your husband's presence. It sounds like a long absence has intervened so the thrill is magnified in your exuberance.

Beautifully written and uplifting!

[Jazique]

Wow nicely done and very descriptive and you can just fel her excitment of seeing him in sight with 'He's home!! He's here! He's breathing on me and He's Mine!!" Well done an keep it up of describing the joy of seeing someone again as first come disbelief and next come joy.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to lay in a bed alone after holding someone for a long time. I enjoyed the description and the story in the poem. A positive ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Heart warming and so emotional written!

[KAREN]

A well done write! It's emotions and heart warming!

[AngelAfterlife]

It kinda reminds me of an army wife :) Waiting for her man to come home and she has dreams of him every night and one night her dream comes true... keep up the good work honey :)