A silky smooth voice in the night

It rings in my ear as i listen to it

An angels voice sings into the night air

Wishing to be there

Im lost in thought of you

Looking out the window

The rain pours down 

As i smile with thoughts of you

Her silky smooth singing makes my body shiver

Wanting nothing more then to lay in the dark with you tonight

Eyes closed, wandering through the night less skies 

Drum bass vibrates through the floor holding you tightly in my arms

Laying in bed tracing the arms that never are but only wish to be.....

Through closed eyes i see you smiling at me 

holding you in my arms, promising to never let go. 

The rain trickles down the house, 

watching you sleep through the stary night 

The silky smooth voice of the lady singing to us fades away 

But you are always in my arms....

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Beautiful, full of feelings and sounds! I imagine the whole picture, even listen to the mysterious voice of woman...I love it!

[NightShade]

This belongs to the Province of Ecstatic Bliss in the Lands of Phantasie. It sighs sensuous whimpers like an organ solo...

[johnnyqueer]

This is very beautiful. perhaps capitalize the I's? Besides that great write :)

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enchanting..

[Jazique]

That was lovely. I just feel the love lately in all these writings espcially your. Thee descriptions were wonderful with such" Drum bass vibrates through the floor holding you tightly in my arms." Well done over all and keep it up.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I had to read a few times to grasp the meaning in the words. I like the feel and the pace of the poem. It was relax and I could hear the silky smooth voice singing with your strong description. Thank you for the excellent poem. I like how you ended the poem.
"The rain trickles down the house,
watching you sleep through the stary night
The silky smooth voice of the lady singing to us fades away "
Coyote

[Vanessa Rico]

Awww this is so romantic...and got me a little teary eyed. Beautiful!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A beautiful dreamy excellent poem!

[KAREN]

Beautiful imagery! Well done too!

[AngelAfterlife]

TERRIFFIC WRITE!!!! I love the emotion in this poem :) Keep it up... i want to read more