TRY ME!!!!!!

You tell me at your age how you can understand

Young minds don't get life..

I didn't at high school age 

How are you suppose to understand what you don't know?

Ridicule others when you haven't been through it?

Tell me then because i guess i don't know 

what its like to keep to your self

to dress in a non sexy way

tell me, go a head young one

How is it a 40 year old man

Can change my life forever?

Go a head tell me 

that you have to be a s**t to get RAPED!!

Tell me that at my age I'm dumb and stupid 

at my age young one.. 

i have been through hell and back 

twice as many times as you will ever BE!!

Author's Note

a little pissed in this one..

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

you have to remember that our dearest God created jerks for some reasons. Probably because He wanted us to get stronger and stronger everyday. Feel better mate, we both know that those who judge people is having the lack of humanity because they are suffered from their superiority complex. What matter now is your own thinking, your own mind. Not theirs.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Some of us at 20 have lived a full and
complete life. Some people, at 80 are
still experimenting with life.
Most people categorize, lump certain
ages together and infur that age acts
and thinks in a certain way.
Intelligent people know that it takes many
different things to achieve maturity,
wisdom, experience, emotion, curiosity
to name a few. All that having been said,
you make a valid point.
Your writing is graphic, imaginative and intelligent.
Great piece.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Kaylor Mason]

Wow. I wish I could offer words, but I'm a guy and as a male anything I would say would sound rather stupid, except . . . . . this is a very good poem. It's very . . . true, for lack of a better way of putting it

[Jazique]

That was awesome and totally speaks the truth. How people think some of others even though they are something else. Its like someone else's state of mind of judgement. I can definitly feel your feelings in this one. Well anyway you did a excellent job and showing the feelings and grammar but, some of editing could be done. In other words magnifico.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some topics are hard. I raised three daughter and I get scare because they are too pretty or wearing not enough clothing. I taught then to defend themselves. The problem with this world. Bad men and woman are allow to run free with rules. I told all my kids. Be careful and have fun. Many bad people in this world. Clothing shouldn't endanger a young person. The world should be a safe place. Your poem open the door to many questions. My advice is simple. Go out in pairs and buy your own drinks.(Or watch bartender make) A excelelnt poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A strong well written poem!

[AngelAfterlife]

I love this poem... I really do understand this one... I was raped when i was younger and it has scarred my life since.... So thank youfor writing this poem... because alot of people dont know about this world

[solo2be]

The emotion in this poem just seeps out . Its almost as if i could here you speaking this aloud. Great write.

[Morgan]

this is fabulous ! but i guess everyone makes there own mistakes ...

[Helpless]

nice! you go girl! inbox me, i really want to know the story behind this one. i think i know already, but i want to make sure i am right before i misinterpret....