Toxic Feelings......

Toxic Feelings...

Thats what you are

inter grading into my mind

Toxic is what the words are that spill

Burning me at the nervous system 

Working your way through!

Toxic waves of feelings that shouldn't be 

words making me shiver with anxiousness 

The way you make me feel 

Toxic is the way you make me feel 

the feelings of love that should never have started

the toxics of your smile reel me in

Toxic feelings... throw it all away

Love me the way you want to.... 

Reviews

[NightShade]

Wickedly delicious poison in a pretty pill!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Great fantasy of Toxic feelings, beauty cascade...

[C.N.Moore]

Fantastic ! I love being able to approach emotion from an unfamiliar angle and you've done just that with this piece - stepping out of the box of normal thought process is such an amazing talent and I appreciate it in every person I come across it in !!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting way to describe the emotion of love. Sometime love can feel like a tonic feeling. Overtaking our mind and heart. I like how you ended the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[guiltyascharged]

Aw, this is so sweet. I know what it means, but my brain is too dead to let it sink in, awww! I love thisss.

[Jazique]

Awe so sweet I'm either crying at this or that I'm so tired. Well done.

[KAREN]

A great heartfelt write!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Here a different way to describe attraction, love the concept where not enough can be bad. Cool write, great job.

[solo2be]

Toxic is a great way to describe love. Because unless you handle it with care you will get burned. Great write.

[Dream Weaver]

Sounds very dangerous but delectable in a
true sense of longing...