night rain shines

Midnight rain gently knocks on my window

He holds me tight in his embrace

Trickling down my chest

Midnight rain runs down.....

running along my bodies lines 

Fingers grip and feel 

Midnight rain flowing through the streets

listening to his breath in my ear 

pressed lips to the sky

Midnight rain tap tap tap against the concrete

aching for him to touch me

Palms pressed against my skin

Midnight rain slowly passes through gutters and drain pipes

His thick member enters the soft pink

movements fast and in rhythm

Midnight rain sparkles through the lights above

Bodies move and crash together 

the cries muffled

Midnight lightning strikes, 

the midnight rain shines in the dance of the skies grace

laying next to him we hold hands...

Oh midnght rain.. shine for us tonight

Reviews

[Stef Outsiders]

wow this is really good... I love the title night rain shines... you write a pretty picture..

[Tate Morgan]

God I love the sound of rain on a tin roof and the heat of an afternoon shower I loved this

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awesome writing..the midnight rain personified as a man..or the analogy of the rain and sex..both seem to work..creative images..lovely strong ideas

[Jazique]

Awe so beautiful. I think the midnight rain is just a gorgeous scene. I love the feeling in the air filling this atmosphere. Well done with your descriptions and all.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The rain add to the desire and the emotion. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful imagery...this gave me a sad feeling, to read of the midnight rain.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Oh...my...god...this was very sensual and full of passions. I love the rhythm, the poetic value was still there but the delicate flow overwhelms the readers and embraced us to the end. Love it

[Ruth]

Beautiful love! This is wonderfully written....the emotion and embrace stepping alongside the wonderment of sensuality is lovely xx

[Dream Weaver]

This has to be the best I've read from your so far.
unbelievable imagery sad and emotive...

[AngelAfterlife]

This poem is so inspiring... believe it or not i cried... wow i'm emotional. lol.. Its very good and keep up the good work... i love it