Reaching

Cliffs of unstable minds

Fall into waters of love and madness

Loves sweet scent drags me to the edge

Faces of magic hearts fly away into the sky

Reaching for them i fall...knowing your arms ill fall

Reviews

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liked the start of this..wanted you so much to delve a little deeper, the image of the unstable cliffs and the waters of love and madness below could have really been the powerhouse behind this..loves sweet scent drags me to the edge..I wanted to know if you have fallen in ..this is so ambiguous, I would love to see you elaborate a little more.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good write my friend.

[Ruth]

Glorious!
Blushingly sensitive and meaningful!
xx

[Vanesa Markovic]

Oh to have the courage to fall!!

[Raymond]

Excellent. Who couldnt love that third line.

[Dream Weaver]

Short and sweetly profund, nice job :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are amazing. In so few words. Create a poem of love and chaos. No weakness in this poem. Just outstanding poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

*sigh* so romantic!!! there are so many ways that one can write about the joys and the amazingly peaceful feeling of being in the arms of someone who loves us and makes us feel safe.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully said, love the imagerys!

[Maggie]

Beautiful!