You think you can run?

You think you can run?

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

Die Mother!!
Go ahead and do it
Cop out and get the easy ticket

Golden tickets of white pills and yellow liquid 
This place was too easy for you
The way you could hide from all your problems 

I'll find you
hidden under the space of hell 
screaming to be let free

i hate you for it all
the answers you never had to give me
how you never wanted to see me

how did you get away with it?
you should have paid for the s**t you pulled 
i wished you dead long ago 

A young child with a tormented mind and shattered heart 
because of you I am a stronger woman, 
The lies subside and I smile through the pain

think you had it easy? 
you will pay
I will make sure of it

Death wont keep you from all that i want from you

© 2011 Misty Blue Eyes


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Full of anger, hatred and resentment. Well done for airing your feelings.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can the emotion in this poem, almost feels like I can hear you reading it aloud. What doesn't kill us makes us stronger, and as i see from this poem you have become much stronger.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Misty Blue Eyes, I feel this poem so much, I have written a similar one about my mother. It is often a taboo to write about such issues but I am happy to find a brave woman full of depth such as yourself.
i was a bit weary of publishing mine but I will now, just for you. I think its comforting to find yourself reflected in another.
Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometime hate can help us. Sometime hate can make us weaker. I had AWOL parent. I learn to appreciate the people who cared for me. I was pissed at my father until I had to walk in his shoes. There are reasons for everything. Can't allow the mistakes of others to tear us apart. A powerful poem with a lot of pain and anger. Death is a peace for some. Maybe? A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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it's a difficult read..mainly because of the focus character being your mother, who should be a loving figure..and this contradicts that emotional attachment. That is what makes interesting reading, something a little uncomfortable..against the grain..not all mothers are loving..clearly. thought provoking

Posted 13 Years Ago


i feel as though im slapping my dead mothers body as i wrote this.... its crazy i know but i hate her

Posted 13 Years Ago


This has such strength behind it. Though I don't know your reasoning, its clear you feel strongly about it.
I'm impressed. :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


i agree, there is much insight into a life of hardship in this write... very emotional

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can tell that this write came deep inside your core
Even though I don't know you I don't think
You should wish death on nobody especially not your mom

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad how things can happen between family members, the anger was flowing through this poem, great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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