Touch me.. you know i'm good for you

Your pain will subside

Just touch me 

The metal of cold death

It doesnt hurt , its just numbing

Watch as the pain lifts from your body

Touch me 

Ill make you smile. I promise 

Heartless thoughts 

Deep cuts

Pick me up and feel me

Look in awe as your blood drips slowly

From my cold metal of death

No one is around. you can go now

Hold me tight in your hand, 

Slicing through that smooth skin

Close your eyes and feel the pleasure of me 

I make your world a little better 

With each open wound

Go a head, i dare you to touch me, 

I'm waiting, do it! don't just stand there

Stop staring......

Reviews

[Light]

this is beautiful. this intrinsic yearning for pain and possibly death that i'm sure a cutter would have. it kind of gives me the chills though, as you coyly have the blade flirt with us...seductive self destruction (that should be the name of a band or something....lmao)....ummm...this was great!

-light-

[My Fair Lady]

After reading this several times today I decided to review it. I noticed that you changed the picture, which was a positive in my opinion, but still gets your point across.. creatively. As far as content... this was really outstanding. I thought about it for several hours, as it bled it's way into my conscious. I am honestly unfamiliar with cutting, which is probably a good thing.. but my heart aches here for the pain that must exist in the soul that a cut.. is comforting. Self destruction.. so sad, so misunderstood. Thank you for sharing such a personal thing.

[Coyote Poetry]

The value of the human touch is under-rated. We need the human touch to feel alive and express kindness/care. The poem is beautiful and I like the emotion and desire in your words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I dare you to touch me

I f*****g loved this poem, except the razor blade. Too cliche, other than that it's awesome.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i think this is my favorite poem that i have read all day, the tone and the style was exquisite

[Jonathan]

That's pretty creative I imagine you talking to the razor blade
Asking it to help relieve the pain your feeling almost like a remedy.
Its like a smoker talking to his cigarette.
I'm reluctant to say good job because this might have come
From you hurting yourself. :(

[Misty Blue Eyes]

the title is of sarcasium.. no one should ever feel so alone as to start cutting or stoop that low to feel alive... i have dealt with self injury in the past and had a relapse. first in 3 years. its why i wrote the poem