Touch me.. you know i'm good for you

Your pain will subside

Just touch me 

The metal of cold death

It doesnt hurt , its just numbing

Watch as the pain lifts from your body

Touch me 

Ill make you smile. I promise 

Heartless thoughts 

Deep cuts

Pick me up and feel me

Look in awe as your blood drips slowly

From my cold metal of death

No one is around. you can go now

Hold me tight in your hand, 

Slicing through that smooth skin

Close your eyes and feel the pleasure of me 

I make your world a little better 

With each open wound

Go a head, i dare you to touch me, 

I'm waiting, do it! don't just stand there

Stop staring......

Reviews

[Light]

this is beautiful. this intrinsic yearning for pain and possibly death that i'm sure a cutter would have. it kind of gives me the chills though, as you coyly have the blade flirt with us...seductive self destruction (that should be the name of a band or something....lmao)....ummm...this was great!

-light-

[Tate Morgan]

Oh if only it were so easy to ease lifes pain i would run to it

[.]

I get the impression youre a knife..like the personification in this..

[Matthew Kult]

I like the insane ramblings, almost as if the were the voices that frequent my head. An excellent portrayal of what it's like those few last seconds before it ends at one's own hand. Excellent flow and structure. Great work.

Regards,

Matthew

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very deep- and eerie. "I dare you to touch me," why would they hold back?
Sometimes people are afraid of doing things they may regret....beautiful.

[J.R Schlievert]

Classic “I will be there for you.” Poem that’s near perfectly executed. The creepiness of it adds a certain flavor to it as well as a specific audience that grabs their attention. Well written, I applaud you :)

[Dark Angel]

I love it. A little creepy that I actually understand that feeling, lol but this is good.

[Grace Catherine C.]

This was good, chilling, even a little scary.

[Dream Weaver]

I know what this is about, great description....

[sarah]

This is so amazing! I loved every word of it great work!

[J.M]

What i like about this was the viewpoint. While many self-harm poems go from the cutter, you went from the knife which was highly original and creative.