Touch me.. you know i'm good for you

Touch me.. you know i'm good for you

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

Your pain will subside
Just touch me 
The metal of cold death

It doesnt hurt , its just numbing
Watch as the pain lifts from your body
Touch me 

Ill make you smile. I promise 
Heartless thoughts 
Deep cuts

Pick me up and feel me
Look in awe as your blood drips slowly
From my cold metal of death

No one is around. you can go now
Hold me tight in your hand, 
Slicing through that smooth skin

Close your eyes and feel the pleasure of me 
I make your world a little better 
With each open wound

Go a head, i dare you to touch me, 
I'm waiting, do it! don't just stand there
Stop staring......

© 2011 Misty Blue Eyes


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this is beautiful. this intrinsic yearning for pain and possibly death that i'm sure a cutter would have. it kind of gives me the chills though, as you coyly have the blade flirt with us...seductive self destruction (that should be the name of a band or something....lmao)....ummm...this was great!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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Oh if only it were so easy to ease lifes pain i would run to it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I get the impression youre a knife..like the personification in this..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the insane ramblings, almost as if the were the voices that frequent my head. An excellent portrayal of what it's like those few last seconds before it ends at one's own hand. Excellent flow and structure. Great work.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very deep- and eerie. "I dare you to touch me," why would they hold back?
Sometimes people are afraid of doing things they may regret....beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Classic “I will be there for you.” Poem that’s near perfectly executed. The creepiness of it adds a certain flavor to it as well as a specific audience that grabs their attention. Well written, I applaud you :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it. A little creepy that I actually understand that feeling, lol but this is good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was good, chilling, even a little scary.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know what this is about, great description....


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so amazing! I loved every word of it great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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J.M
What i like about this was the viewpoint. While many self-harm poems go from the cutter, you went from the knife which was highly original and creative.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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