Ramblings

I cant think! 

thoughts of feelings that should be

hands of yours that should be on me

Laying on a bed thats not there

I cant go on! 

The miles between us

the sun goes down faster 

Up with thoughts of you

I cant do this!

it drives me crazy, 

all these thoughts of us 

jumbled, mumbled and happy

I cant live!

I want and need you here

the beds cold 

the nights lonely

dreams of us together 

I cant wake!

i want to stay here

in this dream of you and me

The sun always shines on us 

I am here....... living, breathing, doing... 

because of you!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[State of Grace]

So emotional! It's fantastic!

[Ruth]

Hell yes! Relatable of late! I so feel you love! Nothing seems to work, concentration low! Wonderful poem! xx

[Matthew Kult]

makes me think of a long distance relationship and the struggles with the distance. Those cold nights when you need them there next to you and all you have is a voice. It can be so frustrating.

Another excellent write.

Regards,

Matthew

[sarah]

Such a strong and heartfelt poem! I could really feel your emotions wonderful write!

[Jonathan]

Came straight from the heart
Its hard to judge feelings.

[KAREN]

Well written and compassionate!

[Void Unspoken]

emotional and intense... very! well written and and thoughtful. i enjoyed reading this and i am looking forward to reading more from you soon!
keep it up!!

[Stef Outsiders]

So much emotion and tensity... another good one!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

ramblings always make wonderful poems, this is awesome!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem of emotion and desire. Most of us feel like the emotion in this poem. Wanting something that is too far away. Want to hide away till they appear again. I like the story in your poem. No weakness in the poem. Just strong words of sadness and loneliness. A excellent poem.
Coyote